I received some more feedback on the blurb for my upcoming novel, What She Didn’t Know. So, once again, I’ve changed it up so that it’s less wordy and more smooth and to the point:
Growing up with an alcoholic abusive father, Michaela, Gloria, and Seraphima carry deep internal wounds into adulthood. When a tragic event shatters their world and a long-held family secret is discovered, will they be able to repair their broken ties and heal from the past?
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